I feel empty. I feel naked.
I feel, it (the fear) has been taken out of me.
And have filled me with something lighter.
Making this emptiness so filling that I feel naked.
And original.
– Gursimran Kaur
I feel empty. I feel naked.
I feel, it (the fear) has been taken out of me.
And have filled me with something lighter.
Making this emptiness so filling that I feel naked.
And original.
– Gursimran Kaur
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February 19, 2017 at 2:31 am
Your last line: perfect!
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February 19, 2017 at 8:52 am
Thank you!
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February 23, 2017 at 4:09 am
Beautiful. At first it seems there is still some fear, then it is gone. I sense wonderment, then freedom. I think we all are better naked. Sat Sri akal
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February 26, 2017 at 1:28 am
Intricate and yet interesting.
Keep it up!
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February 26, 2017 at 12:13 pm
Thank you!
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February 26, 2017 at 6:45 pm
In our own nakedness lies truth…beautiful one…will read more.
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February 26, 2017 at 6:47 pm
Sure. Thank you!
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March 4, 2017 at 12:06 pm
Reblogged this on Orthometry.
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March 14, 2017 at 9:53 am
Thank you very much!
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March 14, 2017 at 2:36 pm
You are welcome!
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March 4, 2017 at 1:09 pm
When there is emptiness… what is possible ?
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March 9, 2017 at 2:55 am
Awesome!
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March 14, 2017 at 9:52 am
Thank you!
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March 13, 2017 at 1:25 am
very nice!
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March 14, 2017 at 9:50 am
Thank you!
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March 13, 2017 at 2:09 am
Exquisite
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March 13, 2017 at 10:36 am
Thank you!
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March 20, 2017 at 2:54 am
Thank you for sharing. Enjoy the day.
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March 22, 2017 at 6:44 pm
😍
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March 22, 2017 at 10:16 pm
Raw ,crude ,pure ,needs guts to be naked ,physically as well as psychologically
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March 26, 2017 at 5:53 am
I think you’ve captured exactly how it feels when your fears, if only for a moment, leave you – and your linking that to feeling original is brilliant and true. Excellent poem!
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March 26, 2017 at 10:07 am
Thank you!
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May 2, 2017 at 11:51 pm
Yes, fear is such a heavy, filling thing, the absence of which is bliss.
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June 5, 2017 at 10:32 am
Feeling empty and filled and original will let you drift and touch earth again before being you in your most perfect state.
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